The Proposal Part 2

The PROPOSALn Part2

It was another boring day. There was absolutely nothing to do. I sat on my favourite sofa and wondered, “Ever since I rejected his proposal, he has not taken the initiative to come and find me. What a jerk!”

Just then, I heard loud honking outside my house. “Bor,Bor!” The noise was deafening! I thought to myself, “Who is the one honking away?” I went to the window and stared out of it. When I saw what was outside the window, I stood rooted to the ground and deep in my heart, I was smiling. Smiling from ear to ear. “Hmpf, you are finally back here to win my heart back. And with my favourite CAR- the Lamborgini Gallardo! It must be for me!” I thought.

Edmond stood by the car, with his hands on his hips, smiling triumphantly. (explain triumphantly) He must be smiling so victoriously because he knew I was going to say YES.

He greeted me and then went into his car to ‘unveil’ the cabriolet (car in which the roof can be opened). To my deepest horror, there was a woman in the car, a woman more attractive than me. She was flamboyant and gorgeous. Instantly, I felt a sense of jealousy. Deep in my heart, I wondered, “How could he do this to me?” I stared out at him, wondering what I had done wrong.

At that moment, I could no longer take it. I blasted at him, “Why are you doing this to me?!” He replied in a cool manner, “Well… You were the one who thought I was not good enough for you in the first place!”


The bickering continued…


The class will choose the ending for this story. Write an entry in your blogs for the ending of the story. BE SENSIBLE AND LOGICAL in your ending.